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Moontail
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PostSubject: Moontail   Moontail EmptyMon Dec 09, 2013 10:33 am

MOONTAIL

Moontail Moonta10

Gender: She-cat

Current Clan: WindClan

Bloodline: Born into WindClan

Age: 15 moons

Clan position: Warrior

  Kits/Litters: N/A

 Mentor: N/A

 Apprentice: N/A

Appearance: Moontail is a pretty young she-cat with long grey fur. Her tail is tipped in white as well as her paws. Her underbelly is a light grey, and she has darker grey markings running down her head and back, as well as a few markings on her face.

Eye color: Ice blue

Fur color: Her fur is long and mostly grey. Her underbelly is a lighter grey than the rest of her body.

Any markings: She has a white-tipped tail, white socks on her paws, and dark grey markings on her face, head, and back.

Scars: N/A

Personality: 
Likes: Hunting, cleaning her fur, sunning herself, protecting the clan, kits and apprentices

Dislikes: Rivers, no prey, Leafbare, unloyal cats, Twolegs, dishonesty, fire, dogs

Fears: Rivers, fire, the Twolegs' monsters, famine

Other: Moontail is smart, and an excellent fighter. She also knows how to use her good looks to her advantage, and it usually works quite well. Moontail can be quite manipulative if she needs to be. She is also very kind-hearted, and loyal to her Clan, clanmates, and family.

Moontail usually acts very calmly and kindly when around her clanmates. She is gentle with the kits and apprentices, and loves to show off her fighting skills. She is also a very worthy opponent in any fight, as long as there isn't a river around. Her loyalty to her Clan shows year round.

SPECIALS Stats: +5 Speed for WindClan
Strength: 8
Paws: 2
Endurance: 4
Charisma: 5
Intelligence: 5
Agility: 6
Leap: 5
Speed: 10

History: Moontail was born in the middle of spring to two warriors in WindClan. When she was just a few moons the season changed to summer, and there was a drought. Prey became very scarce, and sadly her littermates didn't survive. Moontail survived the famine (obviously) and became a healthy, strong apprentice at the age of 7 moons. Due to her mother, her apprenticeship was delayed. Because of her lost kits, Moontail's mother was extremely protective over her remaining daughter. For a long time, her mother didn't allow any cats to even go near her.
Eventually Moontail was given a wise and strong mentor, a tom named Autumnpelt, who taught the young apprentice everything he knew. After Moontail became a warrior at the age of 13 moons, her and Autumnpelt grew to be very close friends. Moontail has never thought about having a mate, so that means that Autumnpelt is friend-zoned for now. (Poor guy... Razz)

Sample RP segment: A Twoleg is chasing your OC.

Moontail backed into a bush, her hackles and tail bristling. The she-cat growled at the ugly Twoleg paw reaching for her and slashed at it with her claws. The paw quickly recoiled. The Twoleg made a weird noise that was probably it trying to communicate, and tried again.

"Get away from me!" Moontail yowled, and sunk her teeth into the Twoleg's flesh. The odd creature let out a howl of pain and ran off, blood dripping off its paw. The grey Warrior spat the Twoleg's foul-tasting blood on the ground and ran off towards WindClan camp.

Acceptance!!


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PostSubject: Re: Moontail   Moontail EmptyMon Dec 09, 2013 10:50 am

Hey Moontail, welcome to the site ^.^ Issues stated below, please fix ASAP so you can start rping immediately!

The image you have is not showing up, is there a way you could fix this?

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Appearance: Moontail is a pretty young she-cat with long grey fur. Her tail is tipped in white as well as her paws. Her underbelly is a light grey, and she has darker grey maekings running down her head and back, as well as a few markings on her face.

Eye color: Ice blue

Fur color: See appearance above ^

Any markings: See appearance above ^

The section labeled appearance is merely for notes that aren't covered in the below categories. So markings and the base fur color should be in the according areas.

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Personality:  Moontail is smart, and an excellent fighter. She also knows how to use her good looks to her advantage, and it usually works quite well. Moontail can be quite manipulative if she needs to be. She is also very kind-hearted, and loyal to her Clan, clanmates, and family.

This category, stating personality, is just to say what the section is for. Any notes on the personality should be in the "other" part. So simply add this part to what is already stated in the other area.

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SPECIALS Stats: (Wasn't quite sure how to divide this up...)
Strength: 5
Perception: 5
Endurance: 5
Charisma: 5
Intelligence: 5
Agility: 5
Luck: 5
Speed: 5

The SPECIALS stats are explained in the rules. It doesn't make much sense for all of them to be the same, especially because of the +5 points that each clan receives. WindClan's special stat is speed, so simply add +5 to the speed section.

Rules applying to this below

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6. In all OC's apps, there must be the SPECIALS stats. Strength, Paws (hard paws), Endurance, Charisma, Intelligence, Agility, Leaping and Speed. Please make it appropriate to his/clan, obviously, WindClan will have more speed and endurance points than RiverClan, and ThunderClan will have more strength. The rest depends on your OC. OC's with more strength have stronger attacks, more perception points means he/she can figure problems out quickly. endurance means they can endure more pain, charisma-can he/she talk his/her way out of a mess? Intelligence means they can understand and learn faster, agility means they can dodge and are flexible. Luck can control their ability to dodge or get out of sticky situations, or not get caught. Speed means they're fast, would be more for WindClan. Each OC can have 40 points, use them wisely. Mods and Admins will count up the points and make sure they add up to 40.
7. For each clan there is a SPECIALS stat specific for that clan added onto his/her already existent 40 points. It will be +5 speed for WindClan, +5 endurance for ThunderClan, +5 strength ShadowClan and +5 agility for RiverClan. +3 leaping and +2 paws for SkyClan. +5 Intelligence for the Tribe of Rushing Water. If your OC is not born into that clan, he/she will have a +3 to the adopted clan's specialty, but keep +2 of their original clan. Rogues and loners receive a 3 point bonus in any of the categories instead of the +5. Kittypets get 2 point extra for one SPECIALS of their choice. Rogues or Loners who join clans will gain +1 of the adopted clan's ability, while keeping +2 of the rogue/loner category. Kittypets joining clans will keep the one point of their choice while the other goes to the adopted clans specialty.
9. The highest a stat for any of the SPECIALS can be is 10. If your OC has 6 or over in the category that will be gaining 5, remove the overdone points and add them to another part. Ex. Strength: 6. Add the 5 for being in ShadowClan. Strength: 10. Add the remaining 1 to another part, such as speed or agility


Plus the change to the SPECIALS stat stated in this link https://warrior-cats-oc-rp.forumotion.com/t44-change

Please add more to the history as well, it's a bit bare.
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PostSubject: Re: Moontail   Moontail EmptyMon Dec 09, 2013 6:35 pm

Fixed!! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Moontail   Moontail EmptyMon Dec 09, 2013 6:51 pm

Almost there!
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SPECIALS Stats: +5 Speed for WindClan
Strength: 8
Paws: 2
Endurance: 4
Charisma: 4
Intelligence: 5
Agility: 6
Leap: 5
Speed: 6

Your points add up to 40, but with the +5 speed it should also add up to 45. So leave where it says +5 at the top but also add the 5 to the speed category. But remember, there can only be 10 points in one category, so add the extra 1 to another section.

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She had to wait a long time to find a mentor, because no cat wanted to try.

The clan leader would choose the cat's mentor....

And about Autumnpelt. You say they grew close? How close? When did Moontail become a warrior? What happened after that? Did she become Autumnpelt's mate? If so, he couldn't be her mentor. If a mentor as affection for his or her apprentice, he/she will be too soft on the 'paw.


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PostSubject: Re: Moontail   Moontail EmptyMon Dec 09, 2013 7:07 pm

Fixed again!
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PostSubject: Re: Moontail   Moontail EmptyMon Dec 09, 2013 7:43 pm

After much debate and frustration, Approved Hope you enjoy roleplaying ^.^ And if you want, I can crop out the unnecessary parts in the picture
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